I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi this is Shylah from Room 7 Hornby Primary School. I really like your drawing, it is really creative. I like the part where you told her favourite food. My favourite food is butter chicken. Maybe you could make more information about her/him. I was wondering if that drawing is a boy or girl?
Hi my name is Freya I think your blog is good . It is very interesting. But maybe you can ad more words. I also think you should read it before you post it. Also maybe add a picture of Squeak.
Kia ora Scarlett, You have done a good job on the drawing! I hope you had fun drawing it. Next time maybe you could check you spelling. Why did you make this drawing and when did you do it? That's all from me Bye!
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Hi this is Shylah from Room 7 Hornby Primary School. I really like your drawing, it is really creative. I like the part where you told her favourite food. My favourite food is butter chicken. Maybe you could make more information about her/him. I was wondering if that drawing is a boy or girl?
ReplyDeletethank you Shylah for commenting on my blog
Deleteits a girl dolphin
Hi my name is Freya
ReplyDeleteI think your blog is good .
It is very interesting. But maybe you can ad more words.
I also think you should read it before you post it.
Also maybe add a picture of Squeak.
THAT IS REALY COOL!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Scarlett,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a good job on the drawing! I hope you had fun drawing it.
Next time maybe you could check you spelling. Why did you make this drawing and when did you do it? That's all from me Bye!
Hello Scarlett Its Sapphire here i really like your post maybe you can do a post about your toy pets! bye!
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