I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
L am olivia m for room blue and l like you have cool stuff in your blog and you have orana park it cool and wow you have do will scarlett come up with good work and l lik how you have help to make one have a goodbye scarlett
Hello Scarlett I love the way you put the animal on the background that you were talking about. This gave me a memory about when I went to the Orana park with my Mum. Make sure you put more interesting stuff in there by the way you have put some interesting stuff in there. By the way I have a question. Did you enjoy Orana park
Kia Ora Scarlett. I like your blog post about Orana Wildlife Park. You did such a cool google slide. Good job Scarlett. I like the photos you put on the slide. Maybe next time you could tell us what your blog post will be about?
Kia Ora Scarlett it is Lacie here. I like your blog post about Orana park. My favourite animal at Orana park was the tigers and the lions. What is your favourite animal at Orana park? Did you Mum come to Orana Park?
I really like your blog post about Orana park. You did such a great slide. I like how you put the photos on each side. Maybe next time you could write a bit more on each slide? Blog you later
Kia ora Scarlett good job on this i like the picture that you guys have done you have done a great job and nice memories Maybe next you could make it more pretty but still good job
Kia Ora Scarlett! I like how you presented this with a friend! I know the bird avery was probably the favourie of the trip. You did such a good job on your post! Next time could you maybe add a wee bit more info (Not pushing it) so we know a bit more about your pictures. From Mikayla.
Kia ora Scarlett. I like the colours and the images you've put in because if someone doesn't know what a kea looks like they might feed it on accident. Next time you can make more use of the space or more information so there isn't a big space in the slides.
Hi its ethan i go to school u blog post is so cool and amazing but can u please next time put more wrting then that and a lot bit more slides but u have a good job and cool blog you later from ethan
kia ora scarlett I enjoyed the part when you talk about the giraffes You brought me back to when we went to orana Park why did you put this on your blog
Hello Scarlett, Acasia here I like how you added the picture it makes it more interesting. I also like how you added a fact on each animal I think that's pretty cool. Maybe next time you could have added more information about the whole trip and all that. Good Job.
Kia Ora Scarlett, Great work on creating this with Lucy! Next time you could add more information to get more brain cells wondering. But great job on getting this done.
Kia ora Scarlett I like your blog post about Orana Park I also like the images you added they are really cool.Maybe Next time add a few more images and info to the slide for more intrest. But thats all Bye.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Wow i didin't know you went to orana park because i went on holiday Bye-bye
ReplyDeleteHello Scarlett it's me Wiari me I really like you facts about Orana part and also your details.
ReplyDeleteL am olivia m for room blue and l like you have cool stuff in your blog and you have orana park it cool and wow you have do will scarlett come up with good work and l lik how you have help to make one have a goodbye scarlett
ReplyDeleteHey its me Sapphire that really cool maybe next time you can lean some more of some staff. bye have a good time
ReplyDeleteKia ora
ReplyDeleteScarlett, I like your work and it's cool
maybe you could put more facts in them so it will be interesting. Bye!
Hello Scarlett I love the way you put the animal on the background that you were talking about. This gave me a memory about when I went to the Orana park with my Mum. Make sure you put more interesting stuff in there by the way you have put some interesting stuff in there. By the way I have a question. Did you enjoy Orana park
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Scarlett.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about Orana Wildlife Park. You did such a cool google slide. Good job Scarlett. I like the photos you put on the slide.
Maybe next time you could tell us what your blog post will be about?
Blog you later.
Kia Ora Scarlett it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about Orana park.
My favourite animal at Orana park was the tigers and the lions. What is your favourite animal at Orana park? Did you Mum come to Orana Park?
Kia Ora Scarlett
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post about Orana park. You did such a great slide. I like how you put the photos on each side.
Maybe next time you could write a bit more on each slide?
Blog you later
Kia ora Scarlett
ReplyDeletegood job on this i like the picture that you guys have done you have done a great job and nice memories Maybe next you could make it more pretty but still good job
Kia Ora Scarlett!
ReplyDeleteI like how you presented this with a friend! I know the bird avery was probably the favourie of the trip. You did such a good job on your post! Next time could you maybe add a wee bit more info (Not pushing it) so we know a bit more about your pictures.
From Mikayla.
Hi its Scarlett on the teacher computer cus my one is flat thx can you look at my secret nighbor one plz?
DeleteKia ora Scarlett.
ReplyDeleteI like the colours and the images you've put in because if someone doesn't know what a kea looks like they might feed it on accident. Next time you can make more use of the space or more information so there isn't a big space in the slides.
i like the colours and the images you've put in some good facts
ReplyDeleteHi its ethan i go to school u blog post is so cool and amazing but can u please next time put more wrting then that and a lot bit more slides but u have a good job and cool blog you later from ethan
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kian here I like the way you explained tsome of the facts about the animals.Maybe next time you could add fullstops.
ReplyDeletekia ora scarlett
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you talk about the giraffes
You brought me back to when we went to orana Park
why did you put this on your blog
Hello Scarlett, Acasia here
ReplyDeleteI like how you added the picture it makes it more interesting. I also like how you added a fact on each animal I think that's pretty cool. Maybe next time you could have added more information about the whole trip and all that. Good Job.
Kia Ora Scarlett,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on creating this with Lucy! Next time you could add more information to get more brain cells wondering. But great job on getting this done.
Kia ora Scarlett I like your blog post about Orana Park I also like the images you added they are really cool.Maybe Next time add a few more images and info to the slide for more intrest. But thats all Bye.
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